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The pie charts provide some information about the percentage usage of energy.

The pie charts provide some information about the percentage usage of energy and its impact on Australia's greenhouse gases. The first one compares five reasons for using power and the second one is about gas emissions related to them. Overall, most energy usage accounts for water heating and heating based on present information and produces more greenhouse gas emissions. On the one hand, in the first pie chart, the highest usage energy rate is accounted for heating with 42%, following that water heating with no significant differences, 30%, has a second rate. The percentage of other appliances is approximately twice as high as refrigeration, with 15% and 7%, respectively. Moreover, lighting and cooling with 4 and 2 percent have been ranked as the least energy use ones. The second pie chart provides the proportion of greenhouse gas emissions which is have been produced by these cases. The most emissions are related to using water heating with 32% and a few less in other appliances with 28%. It is noticeable that there are no significant differences between refrigeration and heating usage, 14% and 15%, respectively. The remaining figures are related to cooling and lighting, responsible for nearly 10 and 5 percent of emissions.

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