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Task 1: DESCRIPTION - 10 minutes (75-150 words) Write a brief description of this chart and the information it contains. https://scontent.frgn9-1.fna.fbcdn.net/v/t1.15752-9/136230397_263748485273099_6193383592840958892_n.png?_nc_cat=102&ccb=2&_nc_sid=ae9488&_nc_eui2=AeFNbg_7Z_DbZ6OCWL-Su4y4gg_JyIN6yZKCD8nIg3rJknh5B7T7KYczWO3FujbY2Iik1OedO2edT3DC4GfDzTeu&_nc_ohc=7rT5QXMR0zMAX-4vhm4&_nc_ht=scontent.frgn9-1.fna&oh=3cee540758ae392b5c7ff01e02d82477&oe=601A3FE5

The chart illustrates the considerable decrease amount of adults who don’t use internet between 2000 and 2018. Overall, many US adults did not consume online in 2000, however, most of them used internet 18 years later. According to the chart, almost half the adults (48%) did not use internet in 2000. Moreover, followed by 2005, 2010 and 2015 the offline population decreased bit by bit and each had 32%, 24% and 15% respectively. Lastly, in 2018, the population of offline adults continued decreasing to until 11% and it became the least amount of offline population in all over the period given.

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use
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many
 US You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpersonwomanman
adults
 did not consume online in 2000, however
, most of them This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 internet 18 years later.

According to the chart, almost half the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpersonwomanman
adults
 (48%) did not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 internet in 2000. Moreover
, followed by 2005, 2010 and 2015 the offline population decreased bit by bit and each had 32%, 24% and 15% respectively
. Lastly
, in 2018, the population of offline You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpersonwomanman
adults
 continued decreasing to until Use a comma before ‘and’ if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).11%, and
11% and
 it became the least amount of offline population in all over the period This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
. 