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Percentage of UK people who consumed daily recommended amount of fruit and vegetable in 2002, 2006 and 2010.

The bar chart depicts the data of dieting habits for people in the United Kingdom in 2002, 2006, and 2010 for men, women, and children. At a glance, women ate the most fruit and vegetable, while, kids consumed the least amount. To begin with, in 2002, healthy food only consumed by 11% of kids, showing a big contrast with females which reached more than double at 25%. Meanwhile, the consumption of male was 3% less than women. Subsequently, in 2006, the number considerably climbed reaching 26%, 32%, and 18% for men, women, and children respectively. At the same time, the women's diet peaked as the highest year of healthy food consumption. However, in 2010, the percentage noticeably dipped to almost the same amount as it was at 26%, although the rate for men and children were not quite dropped at 24% and 16% for each causing the same position as those were.
The bar chart depicts the data of dieting habits for
people
in the United Kingdom in 2002, 2006, and 2010 for
men
,
women
, and children. At a glance,
women
ate the most fruit and vegetable, while, kids consumed the least amount.

To
begin
with, in 2002, healthy food
only
consumed by 11% of kids, showing a
big
contrast with females which reached more than double at 25%. Meanwhile, the consumption of male was 3% less than
women
.
Subsequently
, in 2006, the number
considerably
climbed reaching 26%, 32%, and 18% for
men
,
women
, and children
respectively
. At the same time, the women's diet peaked as the highest year of healthy food consumption.
However
, in 2010, the percentage
noticeably
dipped to almost the same amount as it was at 26%, although the rate for
men
and children were not quite dropped at 24% and 16% for each causing the same position as those were.
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IELTS academic Percentage of UK people who consumed daily recommended amount of fruit and vegetable in 2002, 2006 and 2010.

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