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The average of middle-income families spent their household budget in two different years

The average of middle-income families spent their household budget in two different years nXy1E

The charts showed the average of middle-income families spent their household budget in two different years which were in 2010 and 2012. The pie diagram was shown in each chart to represent different budget allocation from housing, food/clothes, vacation/leisure and miscellous. From the charts, we can see the budget allocation is changing from 2010 into 2012. The most significant change is on the housing allocation where it increased 15% from the 2010. The budget allocation for food/clothes was also increased 10% from 25% in 2010 into 35% in 2012. The allocation for vacation/leisure seemed decreasing from 15% into 10%, whereas for other allocation was shown increased into 5%.

The charts This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstratedportrayedindicateddisplayed
showed
 the average of middle-income families spent their household You use this word too often, consider replacing it withallocationtotalaccountcost
budget
 in two This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 years which were in 2010 and 2012. The pie diagram was shown
 in each chart to represent This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withallocationtotalaccountcost
budget
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withallotmentappropriationquotashare
allocation
 from housing, food/clothes, vacation/leisure and Possible spelling mistake found.miscellaneousmiscellanymiscallsMarcellus
miscellous
. From the charts, we can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withallocationtotalaccountcost
budget
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withallotmentappropriationquotashare
allocation
 is changing Nonstandard phrase. Did you mean: "from 2010 to 2012"?from 2010 to 2012
from 2010 into 2012
. The most significant This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 is on the housing You use this word too often, consider replacing it withallotmentappropriationquotashare
allocation
 where it increased 15% from the 2010. The You use this word too often, consider replacing it withallocationtotalaccountcost
budget
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withallotmentappropriationquotashare
allocation
 for food/clothes was also
 increased 10% from 25% in 2010 into 35% in 2012. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
The
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withallotmentappropriationquotashare
allocation
 for vacation/leisure seemed decreasing from 15% into 10%, whereas for other You use this word too often, consider replacing it withallotmentappropriationquotashare
allocation
was shown
 increased into 5%. 