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THE CHART BELOW SHOW THE SPENDING PATTERN OF RESIDENTS OF UK AND NEW ZEALAND ON VARIOUS THINGS IN TH EYEAR 1980 AND 2008.SUMMARIZE THE INFORMATION BY SELECTING AMD REPORTING THE MAIN FEATURE, AND MAKE COMPARISON WHERE RELEVANT.

THE CHART BELOW SHOW THE SPENDING PATTERN OF RESIDENTS OF UK AND NEW ZEALAND ON VARIOUS THINGS IN TH EYEAR 1980 AND 2008. q0E8r
THE PROVIDED PIE CHARTS ILLUSTRATE THE EXPENDITURE OF PEOPLE OF UK AND NEW ZEALAND ON FIVE COMMODITIES IN 1980 AND 2008. OVERALL, THE HIGHEST CONSUMPTION BY THE CIVILIANS OF UK IS ON LEISURE WHEREAS, IN NEW ZEALAND THE MOST SPENDING ITEM IS FOOD AND UTILITY BILLS. IT CAN BE CLEARLY SEEN THAT, IN UK, THE SPENDING ON FOOD AND DRINK IS ACCOUNTED FOR 23% IN FIRST PERIOD AND IT DRASTICALLY DECLINES TO 13% IN FINAL YEAR HOWEVER, THE EXPENDITURE ON LEISURE EXPANDS FROM 27% TO 34% IN SAME PERIOD. THE CONSUMPTION OF OTHER ITEMS AND UTILITY BILL GROWS BY 2% WHILE, THE PEOPLE OF UK SPENDS ON TRANSPORTATION DECREASES NEGLIGIBLY BY 1%. THE PIE CHART FURTHER COLLATE THAT, IN NEW ZEALAND, THEY CONSUMES AROUND 29% IN 1980 AND IT FALL BY 4% IN 28 YEARS WHEREAS, THE EXPENDITURE ON UTILITY BILL ROSE BY 4% IN GIVEN TIME. THE PURCHASING ON TRANSPORTATION AND LEISURE SLIGHTLY DROP BY 1% FROM 1980 TO 2008. FINALLY, THESE PEOPLE SPENDS 9% ON OTHER PRODUCTS WHICH, INCLINES TO 11% IN LAST TERM.
THE PROVIDED PIE CHARTS ILLUSTRATE THE EXPENDITURE OF
PEOPLE
OF UK AND NEW ZEALAND ON FIVE COMMODITIES IN 1980 AND 2008.

OVERALL
, THE HIGHEST CONSUMPTION BY THE CIVILIANS OF UK IS ON LEISURE WHEREAS, IN NEW ZEALAND THE MOST SPENDING ITEM IS FOOD AND UTILITY BILLS.

IT CAN BE
CLEARLY
SEEN
THAT, IN UK, THE SPENDING ON FOOD AND DRINK
IS ACCOUNTED
FOR 23% IN
FIRST
PERIOD AND IT
DRASTICALLY
DECLINES TO 13% IN FINAL YEAR
HOWEVER
, THE EXPENDITURE ON LEISURE EXPANDS FROM 27% TO 34% IN SAME PERIOD. THE CONSUMPTION OF OTHER ITEMS AND UTILITY BILL GROWS BY 2% WHILE, THE
PEOPLE
OF UK SPENDS ON TRANSPORTATION DECREASES
NEGLIGIBLY
BY 1%.

THE PIE CHART
FURTHER
COLLATE THAT, IN NEW ZEALAND, THEY
CONSUMES
AROUND 29% IN 1980 AND IT FALL BY 4% IN 28 YEARS WHEREAS, THE EXPENDITURE ON UTILITY BILL ROSE BY 4% IN
GIVEN
TIME.
THE
PURCHASING ON TRANSPORTATION AND LEISURE
SLIGHTLY
DROP BY 1% FROM 1980 TO 2008.
FINALLY
, THESE
PEOPLE
SPENDS
9% ON OTHER PRODUCTS WHICH, INCLINES TO 11% IN LAST TERM.
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