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THE DIAGRAM SHOW HOW SUAGR IS PRODUCED AND THE VARIOUS STEPS INVOLVED IN THE PRODUCTION.SUMMARIZE THE INFORMATION BY SELECTING AMD REPORTING THE MAIN FEATURE, AND MAKE COMPARISON WHERE RELEVANT.

THE DIAGRAM SHOW HOW SUAGR IS PRODUCED AND THE VARIOUS STEPS INVOLVED IN THE PRODUCTION. Xq0wP
THE PROCESS CHART ILLUSTRATES VARIOUS STEPS INVOLVED IN MANUFACTURING SUGAR FROM SUGARCANES. OVERALL, THERE ARE SEVEN MAIN STEPS BEGINNING FROM THE HARVESTING FROM SUGARCANES TO ENDS WITH THE FINAL PRODUCT SUGAR WHICH IS READY TO BE SOLD. MOVING TO DETAILS, THE GROWING PERIOD OF SUGARCANES IS AROUND 12-18 MONTH BEFORE HARVESTING. ONCE SUGARCANES GROWS IT IS HARVESTED BY TWO WAYS (MANUALLY BY FARMERS AND HARVESTING MACHINES). IN THE CRUSHING PROCESS, THE SUGAR CANES WHICH IS HARVESTED CRUSHED UNDER ENORMOUS JUICE MACHINES TO OBTAIN JUICES FROM CANES. THEN, THE CRUSHED JUICE IS READY FOR FILTERED IN Y SHAPES VESSEL MADE FROM LIMESTONE. THE CHART FURTHER COLLATE THAT, AFTER FILTERATION, THE JUICE IS UNDERGO FOR EVAPORATION IN A HUGE CONTAINERS WHICH, IS HEATED ON CERTAIN TEMPERATURE TO FORM THICK SYRUP. AFTER THIS, THE SYRUP IS COME SUNDER CENTRIFUGE PROCESS WHERE, THE ROTATARY WHEEL MOVES TO SEPRATES SUGAR CRYSTAL FROM SYRUP. FINALLY, THE SUGAR CRYSTAL TRANSFER TO ENORMOUS CONATINER FOR COOLING AND DRYING TO FORM FINAL ITEM SUGAR AND IT IS READY TO SOLD IN MARKET.
THE PROCESS CHART ILLUSTRATES VARIOUS STEPS INVOLVED IN MANUFACTURING
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SUGAR
FROM
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SUGARCANES
.

OVERALL
, THERE ARE SEVEN MAIN STEPS BEGINNING FROM THE HARVESTING FROM
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SUGARCANES
TO ENDS WITH THE FINAL PRODUCT
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SUGAR
WHICH IS READY TO
BE SOLD
.

MOVING TO
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DETAILS
, THE GROWING PERIOD OF
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SUGARCANES
IS AROUND 12-18 MONTH
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BEFORE
HARVESTING. ONCE
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SUGARCANES
GROWS IT
IS HARVESTED
BY TWO WAYS (
MANUALLY
BY FARMERS AND HARVESTING MACHINES). IN THE CRUSHING PROCESS, THE
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SUGAR
CANES WHICH
IS HARVESTED
CRUSHED UNDER ENORMOUS
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JUICE
MACHINES TO OBTAIN
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JUICES
FROM CANES. THEN, THE CRUSHED
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JUICE
IS READY FOR FILTERED IN Y SHAPES VESSEL MADE FROM LIMESTONE.

THE CHART
FURTHER
COLLATE THAT, AFTER
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FILTERATION
, THE
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JUICE
IS UNDERGO FOR EVAPORATION IN A HUGE
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CONTAINERS
WHICH,
IS HEATED
ON CERTAIN TEMPERATURE TO FORM THICK SYRUP. AFTER THIS, THE SYRUP IS
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COME
SUNDER CENTRIFUGE PROCESS WHERE, THE
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ROTATARY
WHEEL
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MOVES
TO
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SEPRATES
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SUGAR
CRYSTAL FROM SYRUP.
FINALLY
, THE
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SUGAR
CRYSTAL TRANSFER TO ENORMOUS
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CONATINER
FOR COOLING AND DRYING TO FORM FINAL ITEM
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SUGAR
AND IT IS READY TO SOLD IN MARKET.

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