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The pie charts provide information about different kinds of energy production of France in 1995 and 2005.

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The pie charts provide information about different kinds of energy production of France in 1995 and 2005. Overall, at the beginning of period nuclear and other (except of gas, coal and petrol) energy sources made the lowest contribution to energize, while gas, coal and petrol were the most significant part of energy production. In comparison, at the end of the period petrol decreased about 10%, nuclear energy and other (except of gas, coal and petrol) energy sources increased by around %4. In 1995, gas, coal and petrol accounted for around %90 of energy production in France. Each one of them was around 30%. Then, fourth biggest source was nuclear which was 6. 40%. The other energy sources were 4. 90%. In 2005, coal and gas rose slightly and reached 30. 93% and 30. 31% respectively. Energy production by petrol experienced a downward trend and it was 19. 55% in the end of the period. The other energy sources increased by around 4%, it reached 9. 10%.
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made the lowest contribution to energize, while
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were the most significant part of
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decreased about 10%, nuclear
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accounted for
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in France. Each one of them was
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was nuclear which was 6. 40%. The
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were 4. 90%.

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rose
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experienced a downward trend and it was 19. 55% in the
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