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The pie charts provide data about the cost of living and population distribution in several regions around the globe.

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The pie charts provide data about the cost of living and population distribution in several regions around the globe. The first chart shows the global consumption of food, clothing, housing, transport, and others. It can be seen that the most money spends on food (24%) which is double the expenditure on housing cost, while clothing expense has the lowest proportion (6%). In housing, they spend 12% that is double the expenditure on housing cost. In addition, there are spending 18% on transport, which is three times of clothing expense. The remaining 40% is consumed by other types of resources, except for basic human needs. According to the second pie chart, more than half of the world population settle in Asia, representing 57% of the global population. Interestingly, Europe and America where both of them share a similar percentage (14%). Meanwhile, Africa has only 10% of the global population. Lastly, only 5% of people populate in other parts of the world. Overall, it is clear that most people spend their budget on food and Asia has the highest population.
The pie charts provide data about the cost of living and
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distribution in several regions around the globe.

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first
chart
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the global consumption of food, clothing, housing, transport,
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and others
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that the most money spends on food (24%) which is double the expenditure on housing cost, while clothing expense has the lowest proportion (6%). In housing, they spend 12%
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double the expenditure on housing cost.
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, there are spending 18% on transport, which is three times of clothing expense. The remaining 40%
is consumed
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except for
basic human needs.

According to the second pie chart, more than half of the world
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population
settle in Asia, representing 57% of the global
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population
.
Interestingly
, Europe and America where both of them share a similar percentage (14%). Meanwhile, Africa has
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only
10% of the global
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population
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Lastly
,
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only
5% of
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people
populate in other parts of the world.

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, it is
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clear
that most
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people
spend their budget on food and Asia has the highest
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population
.
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IELTS academic The pie charts provide data about the cost of living and population distribution in several regions around the globe.

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