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The chart below shows the changes in recorded crime in CCTV systems for 2017-2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the changes in recorded crime in CCTV systems for 2017-2019. 7Jpwy
The table illustrates the changes in recorded crime in CCTV systems between 2017-2019 years. Overall, We can say that this system has reduced the number of crimes in most of the points listed in the table. Except for Marham and North Borough, where unfortunately the number of crimes has increased even after the introduction of the system. Most of all, the introduction of the CCTV system affected car parks, where the number of crimes decreased by as much as 73 percent within 2 years. This system also performed well in the city suburbs, where the number of crimes decreased by almost a third, namely by 28 percent over the same time. Not as well as in the previous paragraphs, the CCTV system performed in Cambrok and Council Estate, where the number of crimes decreased by 10 percent, and in Shirehill by 4 percent during the study period.
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has increased even after the introduction of the system.

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car parks, where the
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decreased by as much as 73
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within 2 years. This
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also
performed well in the city suburbs, where the
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decreased by almost a third,
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Cambrok
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decreased by 10
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