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the diagram below shows the process of making a daily newspaper.

the diagram below shows the process of making a daily newspaper. ABaeX
The illustration demonstrates the process of creating newspapers from plantation to paper and then the process of recycling the newspapers for further use. The first process involves cutting down the trees, sending them into a machine in which the barks are removed and stripped from the lugs, and then putting it into a machine that chip the lugs. After that, starts the process of heating, refining, pressing, and drying. That is putting the chipped lug material into a refining machine to be heated, crushed to a heavy pulp, cleaned, and chemichally bleached. At this stage, water is added to the pulp to make a combination that pass through rollers in order to become flattened, pressed, and dried. Although the newspaper is out in this stage, the process do not end here. Afetr publishing the newpaper, the kerbsides are recollected, going through the process of removing the inks. Having been de-inked, the paper will be cleaned and fine screened to be delivered to machine producing the pulp that’s been recycled now. Here is the stage when newspapers are made out of recycled paper. However, this is an ongoing process using the paper for further use. That way, the cutting of trees is diminished without compromising the quality and use of newspaper.
The illustration demonstrates the
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process
of creating
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newspapers
from plantation to paper and then the
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process
of recycling the
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newspapers
for
further
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use
.

The
first
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process
involves cutting down the trees, sending them into a
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machine
in which the barks
are removed
and stripped from the lugs, and then putting it into a
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machine
that chip the lugs. After that,
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starts
the
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process
of heating, refining, pressing, and drying.
That is
putting the chipped lug material into a refining
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machine
to
be heated
, crushed to a heavy pulp, cleaned, and
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chemichally
bleached. At this stage, water is
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added
to the pulp to
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make
a combination that pass through rollers in order to become flattened, pressed, and dried.

Although the
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newspaper
is out in this stage, the
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process
do not
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end
here.
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Afetr
publishing the
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newpaper
, the
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kerbsides
are recollected
, going through the
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process
of removing the inks. Having been
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de-inked
, the paper will
be cleaned
and fine screened to
be delivered
to
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machine
producing the pulp that’s
been recycled
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now
. Here is the stage when
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newspapers
are made
out of recycled paper.
However
, this is an ongoing
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process
using the paper for
further
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use
. That way, the cutting of trees
is diminished
without compromising the quality and
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use
of
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newspaper
.
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IELTS academic the diagram below shows the process of making a daily newspaper.

Academic
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3 paragraphs
210 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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