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The pie charts illustrate the percentage of household spending in two different countries namely Japan and Malaysia in 2010.

The pie charts illustrate the percentage of household spending in two different countries namely Japan and Malaysia in 2010. 9B0Ox
Overall, it is clear that while food, housing, and other goods and services took up the largest proportion of spending, the figure for transport and health care made up the lowest in both nations. Malaysia household spent their money on housing was the highest, about 34%. By contrast, the proportion of expenditures in that field of Japan was dramatically lower, approximately 21%. Additionally, about 29% of the proportion of budget spent on other goods and services in Japan, slightly higher than that of in Malaysia.
Overall
, it is
clear
that while food, housing, and other
goods
and services took up the largest proportion of spending, the figure for transport and health care made up the lowest in both nations.

Malaysia household spent their money on housing was the highest, about 34%. By contrast, the proportion of expenditures in that field of Japan was
dramatically
lower, approximately 21%.
Additionally
, about 29% of the proportion of budget spent on other
goods
and services in Japan,
slightly
higher than that of in Malaysia.
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IELTS academic The pie charts illustrate the percentage of household spending in two different countries namely Japan and Malaysia in 2010.

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