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Instagram is a module of the Meta (Facebook) digital platform ecosystem It is a hybrid platform because it contains both features of the transactional platform and innovative platform. Platform plays role of marketplace, captures value by charging for advertising and opens their application programming interfaces (APIs) to encourage third parties to create complementary apps and services (Facebook for Developers) Players: consumers of content with heterogeneous and often changing preferences and needs (demand side) producers of content: (users and companies- supply-side) companies publish ad and users create content for other users provider and sponsor is Meta Supplier Power - low: Even though there are a large number of companies offering services. There are only a few reputed suppliers for a large range of hardware and software supplies. The threat of New Entrants - moderate to low: The potential for new entrants in the industry is moderate to low, despite low barriers to entry: Any new player will require significant investment ->establish itself and grab market share and need time to develop a loyal customer base. The threat of Substitutes and Current Competitors are indicated as high high: Instagram has many substitute products: Facebook, Tik-Tok, Twitter, Snapchat, Pinterest. Moreover, Instagram faces competition from regional social networking platforms, such as QQ and WeChat in China with 877 and 846 million users respectively. Buyer Power is high: intense competition( buyers are left with many choices). No switching cost. The second buyer is advertisers, they will also shift away to other social media (if Facebook raises the ad prices).
Instagram is a module of the Meta (Facebook) digital
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Platform plays role of marketplace, captures value by charging for advertising and opens their application programming interfaces (APIs) to encourage third parties to create complementary apps and services (Facebook for Developers)

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IELTS academic digital platform ecosystem

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