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a gift I would like to receive from my parents

a gift I would like to receive from my parents M3DbQ

I am going to tell you about a gift I would like to receive from my parents as gift for my coming birthday. It was a smart phone that I like from 2 years ago. I first saw it when I was at grade 11 in the phonestore near my house. Well, having a smart phone on my own was my dream. I needed it for its benefits. So I was jealous of my friends who had smartphones. Therefore, I will be very happy if my parents give me as my birthday present. The smartphone looks nice, slim, and light. It was covered with gorilla glass, touch screen in the back, in the front respectively. As you know, using a smartphone is not difficult, especially for young people who are accustomed to modern technology. So I think it will be easy to me to use the phone as well. I like it so much because it must be very important to me and it will help me in study a lot.

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