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More and more students are compelti g for seat In universities .why this is happening and is it positive and. Negative devolpment

More and more students are compelti g for seat In universities. why this is happening and is it positive and. Negative devolpment PkDej
It has become for an increaing number of students to enroll in universities. It is positive development. To begin. With there are certain reasons why this phenomenon is happing. The first is that nowadays population is increasing day by day. Because of it every year there is incline the number of learners as a result there is a tough competition among students, whereas universities have limited seats for students. Secondly, student want to study in reputed University, as mostly employers hire the employees for job from best Universities bywhich student get their dream job and will have secure career. It is positive development. First is that student started to do hard from their early age to get addimitted in their favourite universities. For that they do their study deligently and and for getting place there is a competition bywhich the are prepare about hard challenges that they will face in near future. Employers of many companies can easily find the best employees. As the universities have tough sysetem and got only the cream of all best schools, so companies do not need to tire themselves to hire staff. To conclude there are certain reason why students want to study in. University, I believe it Is positive development. .
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, I believe it Is
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