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The line graph below shows the international student enrolment numbers at De Salle University from 1980 to 2020.

The line graph below shows the international student enrolment numbers at De Salle University from 1980 to 2020. kLOPR
The line graph illustrates the number of students from five countries, enrolled at De Salle University between 1980 to 2020. Overall, the highest enrollments are made by the Indian students. In contrast, the lowest enrollments are Colombia. The line graph illustrates the number of students from five countries, enrolled at De Salle University between 1980 to 2020. Overall, the highest enrollments are made by the Indian students. In contrast, the lowest enrollments are Colombia. The line graph illustrates the number of students from five countries, enrolled at De Salle University between 1980 to 2020. Overall, the highest enrollments are made by the Indian students. In contrast, the lowest enrollments are Colombia.
The line graph illustrates the number of
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Salle
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Overall
, the highest
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enrollments
are made
by the Indian
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students
.
In contrast
, the lowest
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enrollments
are Colombia.

The line graph illustrates the number of
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students
from five countries, enrolled at
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De
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Salle
University
Use "between" + "and" not "to." Try this: "between 1980 and 2020".
between 1980 to 2020
.

Overall
, the highest
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enrollments
are made
by the Indian
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students
.
In contrast
, the lowest
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enrollments
are Colombia.

The line graph illustrates the number of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
students
from five countries, enrolled at
Possible spelling mistake found.
De
Possible spelling mistake found.
Salle
University
Use "between" + "and" not "to." Try this: "between 1980 and 2020".
between 1980 to 2020
.

Overall
, the highest
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
enrollments
are made
by the Indian
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
students
.
In contrast
, the lowest
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
enrollments
are Colombia.
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IELTS academic The line graph below shows the international student enrolment numbers at De Salle University from 1980 to 2020.

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