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The devision of household by gender

The devision of household by gender dpW17
The given chart shows the average number of minutes per day male and female in Great Britain spend on household tasks. According to the bar graph, females do household tasks far more times than that of males and men take care of odd jobs, gardening and pets more than they do other tasks compared to women. On an average, men spent two and a half hours on household tasks, while this time for woman is slightly less than four hours. It can be seen that cooking, caking and washing up took female the majority of time to complete, with 74 minutes per days, followed by for cleaning house, tiding accounting for approximately 58 minutes of their day. The number of minutes caring of own child and playing was higher than clothes washing, ironing, and sewing with nearly 45 and 25 minutes respectively. However, the least popular tasks for females were gardening, pet care, and maintenance, odd jobs, with 20 minutes for gardening, pet care and 25 minutes for maintenance, odd jobs. On the other hand, men are more active and spend more time than woman in case of gardening, pet care, maintenance, and odd jobs. In this categories they spend about 70 minutes overall, compared with 30 minutes and about 11 minutes per day by a woman respectively To sum up, the chart shows that woman spent more than twice time on household tasks compared to men, while men prefer doing maintenance, gardening and pet care.
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the average number of minutes per day male and
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female
in Great Britain spend on
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household
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tasks
. According to the bar graph,
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females
do
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household
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tasks
far more
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times
than that of males and
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men
take
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care
of
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odd
jobs,
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gardening
and
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pets
more than they do other
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tasks
compared to women.

On an average,
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men
spent two and a half hours on
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household
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tasks
, while this
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time
for
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woman
is
slightly
less than four hours.

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that cooking, caking and washing up took
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female
the majority of
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time
to complete, with 74 minutes per days, followed by for cleaning
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house
, tiding accounting for approximately 58 minutes of their day. The number of minutes caring of
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own
child and playing was higher than clothes washing, ironing, and sewing with
nearly
45 and 25 minutes
respectively
.
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, the least popular
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tasks
for
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females
were
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gardening
, pet
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care
, and
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maintenance
,
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odd
jobs, with 20 minutes for
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gardening
, pet
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and 25 minutes for
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maintenance
,
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odd
jobs.

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,
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men
are more active and spend more
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than
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woman
in case of
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gardening
, pet
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care
,
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maintenance
, and
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odd
jobs. In
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categories they spend about 70 minutes
overall
, compared with 30 minutes and about 11 minutes per day by a
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woman
respectively


To sum up, the chart
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that
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woman
spent more than twice
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time
on
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household
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tasks
compared to
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men
, while
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men
prefer doing
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maintenance
,
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gardening
and pet
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care
.
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IELTS academic The devision of household by gender

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