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The pie charts illustrate information about percentage of sea food which brought from Poland Swedan and Germany to the UK in 1987 1997and 2007 years and table presents total value of sea food which was important to the UK from those countries during same time.

The pie charts illustrate information about percentage of sea food which brought from Poland Swedan and Germany to the UK in 1987 1997and 2007 years and table presents total value of sea food which was important to the UK from those countries during same time. Gkr2
The pie charts illustrate information about percentage of sea food which brought from Poland Swedan and Germany to the UK in 1987 1997and 2007 years and table presents total value of sea food which was important to the UK from those countries during same time. Overall, the most popular country to export sea food to the UK market is Poland in 1987 and the least famous country to export sea food is Germany in all years. All countrys percentage changed over the 20 year period. It is interesting to note that Poland made up 65%which decrease to 35 per cent in 1997 year. The second most popular country was Sweden which comprised 28 % 1987 year. The third most famous country was swedan in three year which was 7 per cent in 1987, 25 per cent in 1997 and 27 % in 2007 years. The second most popular country poland in both year which was35% in 1997 and 30% in 2007 year. The table illustrates that the sum value of importanted sea food in1987 was$7. 40 million, which developed to $9. 10million in1997 and ended in$12. 30million in the last year.
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and Germany to the UK in 1987 1997and 2007 years and table presents total value of
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which was
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to export
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sea
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to the UK market is Poland in 1987 and the least
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country
to export
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is Germany in all years. All
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period. It is interesting to note that Poland made up 65%which decrease to 35 per cent in 1997
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. The second most popular
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was Sweden which comprised 28 % 1987
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. The third most
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which was 7 per cent in 1987, 25 per cent in 1997 and 27 % in 2007 years.
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which was35% in 1997 and 30% in 2007
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in1987 was$7. 40 million, which developed to $9. 10million in1997 and ended in$12. 30million in the last
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IELTS academic The pie charts illustrate information about percentage of sea food which brought from Poland Swedan and Germany to the UK in 1987 1997and 2007 years and table presents total value of sea food which was important to the UK from those countries during same time.

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