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The graph below shows US consumers' average annual expenditures on cell phone and residential phone services between 2001 and 2010.

The graph below shows US consumers' average annual expenditures on cell phone and residential phone services between 2001 and 2010. pGX9

The graph demonstrates the amount spent by customers in US on cellphone and residential phone services from 2001 to 2010 in dollars. The Graph shows a continuous decrease in expenditure on Residential phone services from 2001 to 2010. The expense has decreased from about 700 dollars to approximately 400 dollars from 2001 to 2010. In contrast, the Cellphone services show a continuous increment in the expenditure. The expense has increased from just above 200 dollars in 2001 to above 700 dollars by 2010. The expenditure in Cellphone services show a lesser assent in the periods from 2002 to 2003 and 2007 to 2008. The increment in these periods is lesser than approximately 100 dollars per year. They are followed and preceeded by a similar degree of assent till 2010. The expenditure in Resedential phone services shows the steepest decline in the period 2006 to 2007 preceeded by an approximatelt constant rate of decine till 2010 and followed by a similar rate of decline.

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 from 2001 to 2010 in dollars.

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 from 2001 to 2010. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
The
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 from 2001 to 2010.

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show
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 in 2001 to above 700 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcurrencygreenback
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 a lesser assent in the periods from 2002 to 2003 and 2007 to 2008. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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 by a similar degree of assent till 2010.

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expenditure
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