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The pie charts illustrate how five different types of energy production (coal, gas, petrol, nuclear power and other) have been used in 1995 and in 2005 in France.

The pie charts illustrate how five different types of energy production (coal, gas, petrol, nuclear power and other) have been used in 1995 and in 2005 in France. Overall, while coal and gas represented the most employed kinds of energy in both years, nuclear power and other, which summarises a all the remaining energies not specifically listed in the pies, were the least utilized. Furthermore, petrol was the third preferred type of power both in 1995 and 2005. Gas marginally increased from 29. 63% in 1995 to 30. 31% 10 years later, a similar trend is noticeable for coach, which also minimally rose from 29. 80% to 30. 93% in 2005. Nuclear power and the sources of energy, labelled in the pie charts as “Other”, respectively grew from 6. 40% and from 4. 90% in 1995 to 10. 10% and 9. 10% 10 years later. On the contrary, petrol significantly declined by approximately 10% over time. It dramatically decreased from 29. 27% in 1995 to 19. 55% in 2005.

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energies
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, petrol was the third preferred type of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunctiontalentinfluencecapabilitypotentialcapacity
power
 both in 1995 and 2005.

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power
 and the sources of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstrengthtoughnesspowervitalitystaminaefficiency
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, labelled in the pie charts as “Other”, respectively
 grew from 6. 40% and from 4. 90% in 1995 to 10. 10% and 9. 10% 10 years later.

On the contrary
, petrol significantly
 declined by approximately 10% over time. It dramatically
 decreased from 29. 27% in 1995 to 19. 55% in 2005. 