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The pie charts give the information about the percentage of water used for industrial, agriculture and domestic in six areas of the world. Overall, we can see that developed countries in North America and Europe use the water for the industrial sector. However, water is used for agriculture sector in South America, Africa, Central Asia, and South East Asia. Consumption of water for the industrial sector in North America and Europe are 48% and 53% respectively. The second biggest usage is for agriculture; 39% for North America, 32% for Europe. Domestic usage is between 13% and 15% in these areas. For Central Asia, South East Asia, Africa and South America, percentages of Agricultural use have vast majority. Just South America’s percentage is 71%, the others are above 80%. Domestic use for Africa and Asia is just under 10%, while this percentage is 19% in South America. Consumption of industry sector is about 10% in South America and South East Asia. For Africa and Central Asia, rates are 7% and 10% respectively.
The pie charts give the information about the
percentage
of
water
used
for industrial, agriculture and domestic in six areas of the world.

Overall
, we can
see
that
developed countries
in North America and Europe
use
the
water
for the industrial
sector
.
However
,
water
is
used
for agriculture
sector
in South America, Africa, Central Asia, and South East Asia.

Consumption of
water
for the industrial
sector
in North America and Europe are 48% and 53%
respectively
. The second biggest usage is for agriculture; 39% for North America, 32% for Europe. Domestic usage is between 13% and 15% in these areas.

For Central Asia, South East Asia, Africa and South America,
percentages
of Agricultural
use
have vast majority.
Just
South America’s
percentage
is 71%, the others are above 80%. Domestic
use
for Africa and Asia is
just
under 10%, while this
percentage
is 19% in South America. Consumption of industry
sector
is about 10% in South America and South East Asia. For Africa and Central Asia, rates are 7% and 10%
respectively
.
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