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The pie charts give information regarding how people living in Canada and Australia access news.

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The pie charts give information regarding how people living in Canada and Australia obtain news. Overall, surfing the internet and watching television are the most popular mediums of receiving news in both countries, the former being more popular in Australia and the latter having more use in Canada. Going into detail, 40% of Canadians receive news via television, while 36% percent of people living in Canada have access to news through the Internet. In comparison, 52% of Australians, which is 12% more than their Canadian counterparts, use the internet to look for news, whereas 37% of the people living in Canada, which is almost the same proportion as Australia, watch the news through televisions. Almost a third of the population living in Canada obtain news through printed media, Radio and other unspecified means, as compared to only 11% of people living in Australia who use these mediums to get news.
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in Canada and Australia obtain news.

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news
in both countries, the former being more popular in Australia and the latter having more
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in Canada.

Going into detail, 40% of Canadians receive
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via television, while 36% percent of
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people
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in Canada have access to
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through the Internet.
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, 52% of Australians, which is 12% more than their Canadian counterparts,
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the internet to look for
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, whereas 37% of the
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in Canada, which is almost the same proportion as Australia,
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through televisions.

Almost a third of the population
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in Canada obtain
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through printed media, Radio and other unspecified means, as compared to
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