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Diagram shows production of electricity.

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The given process diagram explain the way power is generated in the geothermal power plant. Overall, it can be seen that whole procedure consists of various steps, initiated with the pumping cold water down and ended with the production of electricity by the equipments. Firstly, it is evident that the cold water is pumped 2. 5 km down into the injection well. After that, injected water passes through the thermal zone which includes hot rocks which make that liquid much hotter. Tenth is hot water is pumped up into the condenser through the production well. Next, through this condenser, only steam of farmer water passes into the generator to give it power. Following this, after getting energy from that hot water vapour, turbine empowers the generator and finally that appliance generates electricity in the plant.
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process diagram
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explain
the way power
is generated
in the geothermal power plant.
Overall
, it can be
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seen
that whole procedure consists of various steps, initiated with the pumping
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cold
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water
down and ended with the production of electricity by the equipments.
Firstly
, it is evident that the
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cold
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water
is pumped
2. 5 km down into the injection well. After that, injected
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water
passes through the thermal zone which includes hot rocks which
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make
that liquid much hotter. Tenth is hot
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water
is pumped
up into the condenser through the production well.
Next
, through this condenser,
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only
steam of farmer
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water
passes into the generator to give it power. Following this, after getting energy from that hot
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water
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vapour
, turbine empowers the generator and
finally
that appliance generates electricity in the plant.

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