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The pie charts depicts the sales for retail sectors such as travel, film/music, books and clothes in New Zealand through Internet.

The pie charts depicts the sales for retail sectors such as travel, film/music, books and clothes in New Zealand through Internet. ePpW

The pie charts depicts the sales for retail sectors such as travel, film/music, books and clothes in New Zealand through Internet. The years of study are 2003 and 2010. Overall, there has been some drastic changes in the sales under travel and film/music sectors, while on the other hand there are some minor changes in sales under books and clothes sectors. In 2003, travel constituted highest expenditure by consumers of 36% which dropped by 8% in 2013. On the contrary, books were spent the least on by consumers I. e. 19% which rose by 3% in 2013. However, sales in the film/music sector became the highest of 33% in 2013 against 21% in 2003. Charts also show the fall in clothes sector from 24% in 2003 to 16% in 2013. It can be predicted from the percentages changes in travel and film/music sector that people have become more comfortable in their routine areas rather than exploring more places.

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