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The diagram below shows the typical stages of consumer goods manufacturing, including the process by which information is fed back to earlier stages to enable adjustment

The diagram below shows the typical stages of consumer goods manufacturing, including the process by which information is fed back to earlier stages to enable adjustment NY9d
The given flowchart illustrates the process of manufacturing consumer goods as well as the stages in which information is fed back to earlier stages. As we can see in the diagram the process of goods manufacturing is a complex process starting from raw materials and manufactured components until end products and the feedback stages to make some adjustments Firstly, it started with storing raw materials and manufactured components until the production is planned. The production planned involved product research and market research to make the design for the planning. The manufacturing production has 4 stages which are assembly, inspection, testing, and packaging of the products. Then, the final products will be dispatched for sales to the consumers. After the products are sold to a customer, some feedbacks will be taken to adjusting the production planning and for market research. While production planning provides feedback for storage, Market research will give feedback for packaging, advertisement, and design. Furthermore, Feedback from the testing phase, Market research, and Product research are used in the design stage and which led back to the product planning stage. To sum up, the production of consumer goods overall involve manufacturing process started from raw materials until saleable product and the feedback which is useful for advertising and design
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is a complex
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starting from raw materials and manufactured components until
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products
and the
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feedback
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adjustments

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with storing raw materials and manufactured components until the
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planned involved
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has 4
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for storage,
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for packaging, advertisement, and
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from the testing phase,
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from raw materials until
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saleable
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feedback
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design
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IELTS academic The diagram below shows the typical stages of consumer goods manufacturing, including the process by which information is fed back to earlier stages to enable adjustment

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