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the first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

the first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use. dmKK
Given are two figures concerning the power consumed in various sections and the emitted greenhouse gas related to these parts in a house in Australia. A glance at the information provided reveals that most energy is used for heating while the highest amount of environmentally-damaging gases are produced by the part of water heating. One particularly interesting fact highlighted by the figure is that by far the most energy-consuming section is heating with 42 per cent but its greenhouse gas emission is about one-third of its power use. Accounting for approximately 30 per cent, water heating, meanwhile, is the second in terms of power application and the major part of producing greenhouse gas. In stark contrast, however, other appliances with utilizing only 15 per cent of energy, surprisingly, cause harmful gases double of the above-mentioned amount, with 28 per cent, as the second important section in greenhouse emission figure. The noteworthy is the fact that refrigeration is allocated a mere 7 per cent of all the power consumed but its dangerous gases emission is twofold. Lighting and cooling, however, meanwhile, are the least in both categories.
Given
are two figures concerning the
power
consumed in various sections and the emitted
greenhouse
gas related to these parts in a
house
in Australia.

A glance at the information provided reveals that most energy is
used
for heating while the highest amount of
environmentally
-damaging gases
are produced
by the part of water heating.

One
particularly interesting
fact highlighted by the figure is that by far the most energy-consuming section is heating with 42 per cent
but
its
greenhouse
gas emission is about one-third of its
power
use
. Accounting for approximately 30 per cent, water heating, meanwhile, is the second in terms of
power
application and the major part of producing
greenhouse
gas. In stark contrast,
however
, other appliances with utilizing
only
15 per cent of energy,
surprisingly
, cause harmful gases double of the above-mentioned amount, with 28 per cent, as the second
important
section in
greenhouse
emission figure.

The noteworthy is the fact that refrigeration
is allocated
a mere 7 per cent of all the
power
consumed
but
its
dangerous
gases emission is twofold. Lighting and cooling,
however
, meanwhile, are the least in both categories.
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IELTS academic the first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use.

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  American English
4 paragraphs
186 words
6.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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