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The graph shows the happiness quotient of people in three metros of a country. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph shows the happiness quotient of people in three metros of a country. XGX5q
The bar graph presents the people who are happy with their career, family and security in three big cities of a country. Overall, it can be clearly seen that three metros have followed the same trend in career and family except security. People in Aurovile are the happiest with their career as well as with family with a remarkable above 80 number of people, whereas people in New City are not so happy with their job, but there was a significant improvement in being happy with family. New City recorded around 45 number of people are happy with their career, and that number increased to 80 in the case of family. Lake View's people are more happy with family. The numbers are above 80, while in career it is a little above 60. Security is less prefer in New City, in contrast to Lake View. People of Lake View are happy with security. The number of people happy with security are 80. Aurovile recorded 60 people as happy with security. Family is the most important aspect in happiness among 3 cities. A drastic decline is seen in numbers in the city of New City and Aurovile in security. This decline is not major in Lake view.
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