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The pie charts below shows the world population

In the year of 1900, as regards Latin American and Caribbean, is accounted for 3% and experienced a just below threefold rise to 8% in the year of 2000. As regards of Africa, it comprised of 4% in 1900, which is inclined to more than twofold to 10% in 2000. As regards had the Asia, which had the ratio of 60% in beginning, fell to 54% in 2000 also Europe including Russia declined by difference of 11%. In contrast, North American and others remain same at 3% and 5% respectively. Middle East and North Africa, a new category represented 6% of world population. Overall, this represents a huge increment in the number of humans on the planet, from 1. 6 to 6 billion in just a one century. Most of the population growth has occurred in developing countries
In the year of 1900, as regards Latin American and Caribbean,
is accounted
for 3% and experienced a
just
below threefold rise to 8% in the year of 2000. As regards of Africa, it comprised of 4% in 1900, which
is inclined
to more than twofold to 10% in 2000. As regards had the Asia, which had the ratio of 60% in beginning, fell to 54% in 2000
also
Europe including Russia declined by difference of 11%.
In contrast
, North American
and others
remain same at 3% and 5%
respectively
. Middle East and North Africa, a new category represented 6% of world population.

Overall
, this represents a huge increment in the number of humans on the planet, from 1. 6 to 6 billion in
just
a one century. Most of the population growth has occurred in developing
countries
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IELTS academic The pie charts below shows the world population

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