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TASK 1 BAR CHART LITERACY RATE

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The bar chart below illustrates the percentages of literacy people by men and women in 7 different areas in 2011. Overall, it is clear that Central Asia is the region which has highest amount of literacy people. Sub-Saharan Africa ranked last in literacy rate with 65% by male and nearly 50% by female, contrary to Central Asia with 100% by both male and female. Which also have equal percentages of literates as well as ranked second that is Central/Eastern Europe, by over 95%. There are 5 regions that show different literacy rates for men and women. The region has the biggest difference between 2 genders is South and West Asia with nearly 80% for men and about 60% for women.
The bar chart below illustrates the percentages of
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Sub-Saharan Africa ranked last in
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rate with 65% by male and
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50% by female, contrary to Central Asia with 100% by both male and female. Which
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Central/Eastern Europe, by over 95%. There are 5 regions that
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rates for
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IELTS academic TASK 1 BAR CHART LITERACY RATE

Academic
  American English
2 paragraphs
120 words
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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