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The delegate of Iraq would like to show some figures that can illustrate the current state of sexual harassment in the country

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Official statistics from the Ministry of Interior show that 91 women were killed or ‘committed suicide’, 203 women either ‘self-immolated’ or were set on fire, 87 cases of sexual assault were recorded, and 7, 191 women filed a domestic violence complaint in 2018 in the Kurdistan region. According to a survey conducted by the Iraqi Women Journalists Forum, 77% of Iraqi women have been subjected to sexual harassment
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IELTS academic The delegate of Iraq would like to show some figures that can illustrate the current state of sexual harassment in the country

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