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The pie charts below shows the comparision of differrent kind of energy source.

The pie charts below shows the comparision of differrent kind of energy source. KldwM
The information about the production of various energy sources in france un 1995 and 2005 was depicted by the given pie charts. The data has been calibrated in percentage. Overall, the both year, the most significant source of coal, gas, nuclear and other experienced upward trend, while the source of petrol showed downward trend. To begin with, the source of energy gas, which was accounting for grew to a mere 30. 31 % in 2005. The coal rise by 1%, whereas that of the nuclear dropped by nearly 10% in 2005. The coal made up 30. 93% in 2005, which was only 1% more than 1995. The other source had slightly more, which was around 9. 10% that in 2005, which was only 4. 90 % in 1995.
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of coal, gas, nuclear and other experienced upward trend, while the
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of petrol
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of energy gas, which was accounting for grew to a mere 30. 31 % in 2005. The coal rise by 1%, whereas that of the nuclear dropped by
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4. 90 % in 1995.
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