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Task 1 The graphs illustrates the literacy changes rates in an African country between 1950 and 2010

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Task 1 The graphs illustrates the literacy changes rates in an African country between 1950 and 2010. In 1950 African country age group literacy rates has increased gradually. In case of in 1970 after twenty years their literacy level has been steadily increased. The age group of 0-20 years old and 41-60 years old literacy rates were matched each other which is 50% and also middle age group raised from 25% to 45% almost. In other hand, in 1990 literacy rate has been dropped slowly according to age group average, but comparing with the previous 20 years the age group of 0-20 year old literacy rates has raised rapidly which is 80% from 25% and also other groups age literacy level were 70% and 65% respectively from 35% and 40%.
Task 1

The graphs
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changes
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in an African country between 1950 and 2010.

In 1950 African country
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age
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group
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rates
has increased
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level has been
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age
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of 0-20 years
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and 41-60 years
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raised from 25% to 45% almost.

In other hand, in 1990
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rate
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average,
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comparing with the previous 20 years the
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age
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of 0-20
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year
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old
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literacy
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has raised
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other
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groups
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level were 70% and 65%
respectively
from 35% and 40%.
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IELTS academic Task 1 The graphs illustrates the literacy changes rates in an African country between 1950 and 2010

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