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Life cycle of plastic bottles

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The diagram shows the life cycle of plastic bottles, how it’s being made, and where it ended up. Once it’s produced, it’s then used, thrown away, which would either be recycled or discarded. The process of making plastic bottles starts with haversing cereal, as it contains glucose which is essential for the making of plastic bottles. The cereal will then be brought into the processing plant to extract glucose. Once glucose is extracted from cereal, it’s then fermented into polymers. Lastly, polymers will then be used to create plastic bottles. These are the steps required to create plastic bottles. When it’s produced it would be transported out of the processing plant to various places to be used. After it serves its purpose, it will be thrown away in the rubbish, which some will be recycled, and some will end up in a landfill.
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, how it’s
being made
, and where it ended up. Once it’s produced, it’s then
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used
, thrown away, which would either
be recycled
or discarded. The process of making
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plastic
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bottles
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haversing
cereal, as it contains glucose which is essential for the making of
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plastic
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bottles
. The cereal will then
be brought
into the processing plant to extract glucose. Once glucose
is extracted
from cereal, it’s then fermented into polymers.
Lastly
, polymers will then be
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used
to create
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bottles
. These are the steps required to create
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plastic
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bottles
.
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When
it’s produced it would
be transported
out of the processing plant to various places to be
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used
. After it serves its purpose, it will
be thrown
away in the rubbish, which
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some
will
be recycled
, and
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IELTS academic Life cycle of plastic bottles

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1 paragraphs
143 words
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