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The pie charts below show the share of Oscar winners by film

The pie charts below show the share of Oscar winners by film 7PRL2
The pie charts illustrate the changes in the percentages of Oscar winners by seven kinds of film in the years 2003 and 2008. It is clear that there are dramatic changes in the proportion of most genres of film, except for Comedy which remained stable over the period. In detail, Action films accounted for nearly 15 % of the rates of winners in 2003 before experienced to about a quarter of the total proportion in the year 2008. The percentage of oscar winners for Science Fiction films doubled up while the figure for Horror dropped to one-third in the year 2008. The rate for comedy films which won Oscars stayed the same at around 10 %. As can be seen, the percentage of Thrillers which won Oscars decreased dramatically from approximately a half to about 35%. However, it also made up the largest figure in the period. Meanwhile, there was a gradual growth in the share of Oscar winners for Documentary and Romance films in 2003 and 2008, by about 5%.
The pie charts illustrate the
changes
in the percentages of Oscar
winners
by seven kinds of film in the years 2003 and 2008.

It is
clear
that there are dramatic
changes
in the proportion of most genres of film,
except for
Comedy which remained stable over the period.

In detail, Action films accounted for
nearly
15 % of the rates of
winners
in 2003
before
experienced to about a quarter of the total proportion in the year 2008. The percentage of
oscar
winners
for Science Fiction films doubled up while the figure for Horror dropped to one-third in the year 2008. The rate for comedy films which won Oscars stayed the same at around 10 %.

As can be
seen
, the percentage of Thrillers which won Oscars decreased
dramatically
from approximately a half to about 35%.
However
, it
also
made up the largest figure in the period. Meanwhile, there was a gradual growth in the share of Oscar
winners
for Documentary and Romance films in 2003 and 2008, by about 5%.
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