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Paradise Island (Map questions)

Paradise Island (Map questions) 30rWb

Overall, it is clear that accommodation and other facilities for tourists were built and that a pier was constructed to permit access to the island by boat. The island was originally completely undeveloped. A number of trees occupied the northern and southern parts. In the central part of the island, two separate accommodation areas were then built, consisting of simple huts arranged around a circular footpath. A reception area and restaurant were located in the centre of these two areas. Another footpath was constructed, leading to the beach on the western edge of the island and an area there for tourists to swim. Access to the island was made possible by the construction of a pier, for tourists to land safely by boat. A vehicle track then connected the pier with the reception area. The vehicle track wound around the reception area and continued a very short distance to the restaurant.

Overall
, it is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
 that accommodation and other facilities for tourists were built
 and that a pier was constructed
 to permit access to the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpeninsulareefarchipelagoenclaveisletisle
island
 by boat.

The You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpeninsulareefarchipelagoenclaveisletisle
island
 was originally
 completely undeveloped. A number of trees occupied the northern and southern parts. In the central part of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpeninsulareefarchipelagoenclaveisletisle
island
, two separate accommodation You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
areas
 were then built, consisting of simple huts arranged around a circular footpath. A reception You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
 and restaurant were located
 in the Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.center
centre
 of these two You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
areas
. Another footpath was constructed
, leading to the beach on the western edge of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpeninsulareefarchipelagoenclaveisletisle
island
 and an You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
 there for tourists to swim.

Access to the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpeninsulareefarchipelagoenclaveisletisle
island
was made
 possible by the construction of a pier, for tourists to land safely
 by boat. A vehicle This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
track
 then connected the pier with the reception You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
. The vehicle This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
track
 wound around the reception You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
 and continued a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 short distance to the restaurant. 