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Explain the process of building bricks for building industry

Explain the process of building bricks for building industry aQn7G

The below given diagram describes the process of manufacturing bricks for the building industry. The types of tools used in the entire process are digger, roller, wire cutter, oven, and cooling chamber. It can be clearly seen from the diagram that firstly, the clay has been dug out using a digger and transferred to the metal grid to separate out big chunks from the smaller ones. Then the filtered particles are forwarded using a roller and mixed with sand and water. Later the mixture is moulded using a wire cutter or mould and is kept in a drying oven for approximately 24-48 hours. The temperature varies from 200-1300 degree celsius in different phases(moderate and high). After this it is kept in the cooling chamber for 48-72 hours. At last, the bricks are packed in the packing facility and sent for the delivery. Hence, we can say that the process consists of 7 phases: digging, filtering, shaping, drying, cooling, packaging, and delivering. Also the bricks are kept in a cooling chamber(48-72 hours) for a longer period of time as compared to a drying oven(24-48 hours).

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cooling
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