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Task 1 map about of today and future development

Task 1 map about of today and future development lXaLQ

The given two maps display the same location, of today and of future, after establishing a lot of infrastructures of development in the area. Overall, the area is going to experience a number of significant changes in the future. The materialistic changes such as bus station, car park, housing, dual carriageway and so on. As can seen from the first map, the school and park are located in the western and in the eastern belts which connected with the main road. Similarly, the country side stayed at beside the shop. In the central area estimated at settlement purpose. Looking closely at the second map, the project modification will completely revamp the site. There will be no countryside and the size of the centre will increase. The main road converted into a footpath, however the shop and school will be remain same but shop turned into other amenities as bus station, shopping centre, car park and housing also. The size of the park shrink noticeably. The motor way Wii be connecting with the all area.

The This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 two maps display the same location, of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :this day and agenowadays
today
 and of future, after establishing This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
a lot of
 infrastructures of development in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
. Overall
, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
 is going to experience a number of significant This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
 in the future. The materialistic This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
 such as bus station, car You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
, housing, dual carriageway and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 on. As can Did you mean "see" or "be seen"?seebe seen
seen
 from the first
 map, the school and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
are located
 in the western and in the eastern belts which connected with the main road. Similarly
, the country side stayed at beside the shop. In the central You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
 estimated at settlement purpose. Looking closely
 at the second map, the project modification will completely revamp the site. There will be no countryside and the size of the Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.center
centre
 will increase. The main road converted into a footpath, however
 the shop and school will be Consider using the past participle "remained"?remained
remain
 same This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 shop turned into other amenities as bus station, shopping Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.center
centre
, car You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
 and housing also
. The size of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
 shrink noticeably
. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
The
 motor way Wii be connecting with the all You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
. 