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buying and renting house in England and Wales from1918 to 2011

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The bar chart displays that buying and renting house in England and Wales from1918 to 2011. In general, the proportion of households owning accommodation rose from1918 to 2011. 23% of the families lived in themself bought house. The number of owning remained steady from1939 to1953. After1971, owning outnumber renting. There was rose by in the number of owning between1953 to 2001, while the percentage amounted to a high point at about 69% in 2001. But the number of dropped by 2001 to 2011(about64%). The percentage of renting fall down considerably, while households renting accommodation around77% in 1918. The number of fall down since1918. Renting to a very low number about 31%. But after 2001 to rose again that the renting percentage rose by 36%in the end.
The bar chart displays that buying and
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renting
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house
in England and Wales from1918 to

2011.

In general
, the proportion of households owning accommodation
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rose
from1918 to 2011.

23% of the families
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lived
in
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themself
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bought
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house
. The
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number
of owning remained steady

from1939 to1953. After1971, owning outnumber
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renting
. There was
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rose
by in the
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number
of

owning between1953 to 2001, while the percentage amounted to a high point at about 69% in

2001.
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But
the
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number
of dropped by 2001 to 2011(about64%).

The percentage of
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renting
fall down
considerably
, while households
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renting
accommodation

around77% in 1918. The
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number
of fall down since1918.
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Renting
to a
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very
low
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number
about

31%.
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But
after 2001 to
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rose
again that the
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renting
percentage
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rose
by 36%in the
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end
.

IELTS academic buying and renting house in England and Wales from1918 to 2011

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4 paragraphs
126 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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