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The pie charts below show the online shopping sales for retail sectors in New Zealand in 2003 and 2013.

The pie charts below show the online shopping sales for retail sectors in New Zealand in 2003 and 2013. 7q6y

The two pie chart illustrates the online shopping sales for travel, music/film, books, clothes sector in New Zealand both in 2003 & 2013. Travel, film and music account for the largest proportion of the total online sales in two selected years. It is easily observed from the chart that travel is the sectors the most significant portion in 2003, comprising 36% of the online sales. Taking the second position, there are 24% of New Zealand spent on clothers. Each online sales including Film or music, and books represent more than 15% of the total online retail sales. In comparison with the data of retail sectors in 2003, those of retails sectors in 2013 follow a different pattern. Film or music, and travel occupies the highest amount of sectors, ranging from 29% to 33%.

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