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The charts show world pineapple exports by the top three pineapple-producing countries in 2009 and 2019, and a breakdown of the cost to the consumer of each pineapple in 2019.

The charts show world pineapple exports by the top three pineapple-producing countries in 2009 and 2019, and a breakdown of the cost to the consumer of each pineapple in 2019. 12MX
The bar graph provides information regarding pineapple exports by the most popular production nations in a decade in globally and the pie chart illustrates the decreased of the price to the buyer to each apple. Discussing first graph, in 2009 Country B was the highest produced pineapple with nearly 4. 3 million; however, it dropped down to the 2. 8 million. Country A was the popular nation for making pineapple in 2019. It breaked all the numbers and reached to 10. 1 million production of pineapple. On the other hand, Country C had only 0. 1 million of production, then it slightly increased with 0. 1 million. Focussing on the next chart, in the distribution and retail area was affected most, with 35 percent of the cost. Profit and taxes were break down 18% and 16% respectively. After that, important licence was contributed 10% in the cost. Export costs and producer had negligible amount at roughly 5%. Overall, it can be seen that in 2009, Country B had big contribution to export pineapple; while Country A ruled the selling of pineapple in all over the world. Apart from this, distribution and retail were majority brokedown of the cost, when export costs was less compared to other.
The bar graph provides information regarding pineapple
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exports
by the most popular production nations in a decade in globally and the pie chart illustrates the decreased of the price to the buyer to each apple.

Discussing
first
graph, in 2009
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Country
B was the highest produced pineapple with
nearly
4. 3
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million
;
however
, it
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dropped down
to the 2. 8
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million
.
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Country
A was the popular nation for making pineapple in 2019. It
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breaked
all the numbers and reached to 10. 1
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million
production of pineapple.
On the other hand
,
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C had
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only
0. 1
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million
of production, then it
slightly
increased with 0. 1 million.

Focussing on the
next
chart, in the distribution and retail area was
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affected
most, with 35 percent of the
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cost
. Profit and taxes were break down 18% and 16%
respectively
. After that,
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important
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licence
was contributed
10% in the
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cost
.
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Export
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costs
and producer had negligible amount at roughly 5%.

Overall
, it can be
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seen
that in 2009,
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B had
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big
contribution to
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export
pineapple; while
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A ruled the selling of pineapple in all over the world. Apart from this, distribution and retail were majority
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brokedown
of the
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cost
, when
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export
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was less compared to other.
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IELTS academic The charts show world pineapple exports by the top three pineapple-producing countries in 2009 and 2019, and a breakdown of the cost to the consumer of each pineapple in 2019.

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