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The chart below shows the value of one country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015.

The chart below shows the value of one country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. JOaD
The bar graph shows the export earnings of various category products in 2015 and 2016. The table demonstrates the difference of percentage in export earnings. Overall, the export earnings of all commodities, except for gems and jewellery has increased in an year. While the Textile industry had a dramatic rise up in export over the time, the agricultural export has got only a slight variation. Even though, the engineering goods had a substantial boom, the petroleum industry is still the topper in regards of export income. In 2015, petroleum products worth 60 million dollars where transported to other countries, which marks the highest exportation credit and the engineering commodities were also sold abroad in fair quantities having 3% less compared to petroleum product. In the same year, the agricultural and textiles had made only a low revenue, which is less then 40 million dollars. Even though all the commodities has shown at least a slight rise up in 2016, the Gems and jewellery income had a fall down of 2 million from 42 million in the previous year. Although, the textile products were the least earning export material in 2015, it had shown a dramatic shoot up of 15. 2% in the consecutive year. The petroleum exports exhibited only a 3% hike in 2016, nevertheless, it is the top most exported product in both the years. The engineered goods being the second most exported item in 2015, it maintained the position with an 8. 5% improvisation. The agricultural industry has made only a slight variation in 2016, when compared to previous year.
The bar graph
shows
the
export
earnings of various category
products
in 2015 and 2016. The table demonstrates the difference of percentage in
export
earnings.

Overall
, the
export
earnings of all commodities,
except for
gems and
jewellery
has increased in
an
year
. While the Textile industry had a dramatic rise up in
export
over the time, the agricultural
export
has
got
only
a slight variation.
Even though
, the engineering
goods
had a substantial boom, the
petroleum
industry is
still
the topper
in regards of
export
income.

In 2015,
petroleum
products
worth 60
million
dollars where transported to other countries, which marks the highest exportation credit and the engineering commodities were
also
sold abroad in
fair
quantities having 3% less compared to
petroleum
product
. In the same
year
, the agricultural and textiles had made
only
a low revenue, which is less
then
40
million
dollars.
Even though
all the commodities has shown at least a slight rise up in 2016, the Gems and
jewellery
income had a fall down of 2
million
from 42
million
in the previous year.

Although, the textile
products
were the least earning
export
material in 2015, it had shown a dramatic shoot up of 15. 2% in the consecutive
year
. The
petroleum
exports
exhibited
only
a 3% hike in 2016,
nevertheless
, it is the top most exported
product
in both the years. The engineered
goods
being the second most exported item in 2015, it maintained the position with an 8. 5% improvisation. The agricultural industry has made
only
a slight variation in 2016, when compared to previous
year
.
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IELTS academic The chart below shows the value of one country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015.

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