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The pie charts below show the online sales for retail sectors in Canada in 2005 and 2010.

The pie charts below show the online sales for retail sectors in Canada in 2005 and 2010. pRXNL

The both pie charts beneath illustrate the online shopping sales for four types of retail sectors in Canada in 2005 and 2010. As meticulously mentioned in the charts, sales of video games contributed least sales in online shopping, while, electronic and appliances was the significant sales sector. In comparison, food and beverages became the largest sales section and home furnishings was the lowest sales margin. Firstly, video games sales accounted 18% in 2005 year. However, it experienced five-fold improvement to 23% in 2010 year especially in the sales of Max Payne and Mario video games. In the same vein, food and beverages section was consists of 22% in 2005 and it gradually rose to ten-fold growth means 32% the highest sales of 2010 year particularly Thumps up cool drink and lays chips. On the contrary, electronic and appliances sector had remarkable sales approximately 35% in Televisions and Air conditioners in 2005. However, it fell to 30% in 2010. Besides, home furnishings reported second major sales section around 25% majorly in double cot beds along with wooden sofa sets in 2005 and it astonishingly dropped to 15% in 2010 year. To conclude, video games and food and beverage sales obtained mass growth threw online. On the contrary, electronic appliances as well as home furnishings sold out extremely low in online.

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