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The graph below gives information form a 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030.

The graph below gives information form a 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030. 0AM1q
The graph illustrates a detailed information report generated in the year 2008 and includes energy consumption in the USA from 1980 to 2030. In the diagram, a total of six types of energy sources considers making a report. Petrol and oil are the most significant energy contributor on the contrary, rest of all energy sources will be the least contributor in 2030. In the beginning, Nuclear, solar, and hydropower started to give with equal quadrillion units up to 5. Hydropower energy not shown much changes over a time whereas, nuclear power consumption will show slight growth and cross five units range. Wind and solar power are predicted to reach a maximum of 5 quadrillion units from 2010 to the end of the period. Lastly, Coal and natural gases gave 15 to 20 units of consumption output earlier but at the end, natural gases will be predicted to provide steady work in the same range. On top of it, Coal will give a linear growth after 2006 onwards till the end of the period. Petrol and oil start form 35 units with slight fluctuation in 1980 to 1985 after that it’s increased from 1995 and will be reached up to 45 units at the end.
The graph illustrates a detailed information report generated in the year 2008 and includes
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energy
consumption in the USA from 1980 to 2030.

In the diagram, a total of six types of
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energy
sources considers making a report. Petrol and oil are the most significant
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energy
contributor
on the contrary
, rest of all
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energy
sources will be the least contributor in 2030.

In the beginning, Nuclear, solar, and hydropower
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started
to give with equal quadrillion
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units
up to 5. Hydropower
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energy
not shown
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much
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changes
over a time whereas, nuclear power consumption will
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show
slight growth and cross five
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units
range. Wind and solar power
are predicted
to reach a maximum of 5 quadrillion
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units
from 2010 to the
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end
of the period.

Lastly
, Coal and natural gases gave 15 to 20
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units
of consumption output earlier
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but
at the
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end
, natural gases will
be predicted
to provide steady work in the same range. On top of it, Coal will give a linear growth after 2006 onwards till the
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end
of the period. Petrol and oil
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start
form 35
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units
with slight fluctuation in 1980 to 1985 after that it’s increased from 1995 and will
be reached
up to 45
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units
at the
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end
.

IELTS academic The graph below gives information form a 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030.

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