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The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station, Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station, xm0r9
A hydroelectric power station can generate electric power by using the energy of water flowing from high level to low level. It works different functions in day and night. In the day time, water in the high-level reservoir go through the intake under the dam Wid's only open in day time. Then the water flow into the power station in which there is a generator The generator is operated by a reversible turbines that can transfer the water flowing force to the mechanical force which is the power of the generator. The generated electricity then goes to the national grid through the power lines. On the other hand in the night time, the power station works in a reversed way. It pumps water in the low-level reservoir to high-level reservoir to provide the enough water for day time's wort The water is pumped by the same reversible turbines from low-level reservoir. So the power station actually consumes energy at night. But that is in order to generate more power in the day time In a conclusion, a hydroelectric power station can generate power is based on the differee height of water level. In day time, it uses the natural water energy. Meanwhile in the night, it transfers the water to create and store the energy for the next day.
A hydroelectric
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power
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can generate electric
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power
by using the
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energy
of
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water
flowing from

high level to low level. It works
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different
functions in day and night.

In the day
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,
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water
in the high-level
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reservoir
go through the intake under the dam
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Wid
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only
open in day
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time
. Then the
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flow into the
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power
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station
in which there is a generator

The generator
is operated
by a reversible
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turbines
that can transfer the
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water
flowing force to the

mechanical force which is the
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power
of the generator. The generated electricity then goes to the

national grid through the
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power
lines.

On the other hand
in the night
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time
, the
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power
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station
works
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in a reversed way
. It pumps
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in

the low-level
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reservoir
to high-level
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reservoir
to provide the
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enough
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water
for day time's wort

The
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water
is pumped
by the same reversible turbines from low-level
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reservoir
.
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So
the
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power
station

actually consumes
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energy
at night.
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But
that is
in order to generate more
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power
in the day time

In a conclusion, a hydroelectric
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power
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station
can generate
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power
is based
on the
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differee
height

of
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water
level. In day
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time
, it
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uses
the natural
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water
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energy
.
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Meanwhile
in the night, it transfers the

water to create and store the
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energy
for the
next
day.

IELTS academic The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station,

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