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The illustrations portray the design of a wave-energy machine, and how it works, including two options for its location.

The illustrations portray the design of a wave-energy machine, and how it works, including two options for its location. 3dGX
The illustrations portray the design of a wave-energy machine, and how it works, including two options for its location. Overall, the diagrams explain the different parts and the structure of the machine. After several steps the strength of the waves can produce energy. Moreover, it presents two options for where to install the machine, considering installation costs and the waves that reaches the spot. Starting the process, the water enters the machine, making the water levels increase, which with the help of two turbines they are able to make air flow, so that it generates electricity. In addition, where to allocate the machine is presented. First, near the land the costs for installing will be lower, but the little waves that are reached there give less output. Second, more in deep water the installation will have higer costs, however it will provide a better output in comparison with the first option presented.
The illustrations portray the design of a wave-energy
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machine
, and how it works, including two options for its location.

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, the diagrams
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different
parts and the structure of the
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machine
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several steps the strength of the waves can produce energy.
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, it presents two options for where to install the
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machine
, considering installation costs and the waves that reaches the spot.

Starting the process, the water enters the
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machine
, making the water levels increase, which with the
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help
of two turbines they are able to
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make
air flow,
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so
that it generates electricity.
In addition
, where to allocate the
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machine
is presented
.
First
, near the land the costs for installing will be
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lower
,
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little
waves that
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there give less output. Second, more in deep water the installation will have
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higer
costs,
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it will provide a better output
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first
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IELTS academic The illustrations portray the design of a wave-energy machine, and how it works, including two options for its location.

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  American English
3 paragraphs
152 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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