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The diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location. JBgk
The figures above describes how a wave-energy device produces power and introduces a couple of models which have different manufacturing price and settlement position. As can be seen from the picture, this equipment generates power by a combination of wave and air movements, through a complicated system includes a range of separately fuctioned sections. In terms of operational structure, the device consists of two levels. The lowest level is built halfly under the water so that the wave can go inside and creating wind from its movements. On this room’s ceiling, two doors were created, the left one is totally opened so that the air can be blown up to the second floor and a ventilation was built on the right as a path of the wind comes from the upper room. On the second floor, which is put above the water level, a double turbine device was set exactly at the middle of the room and divides it into three parts: two separated rooms in the same size on the left, each contains one turbine engine and another chamber is on the right, in which both turbines are fuctioned. In contrast with the first floor’s ceiling, the ventilation was set on the left to get the wind from outside while an opened door is on the right to expel the air. When the wind of the first floor blows to the large room on the second floor, the lower turbine is moved, while the air from outside goes from the upper small room to the chamber then flies down to the first floor and moves the higher turbine. In general, the stronger the wave is, the stronger the wind is and it will create much power to form electrics. Therefore, it is more efficient if the wave-energy device is settled far from the coast to get bigger wave. Nonetheless, it means the equipment must have a big and solid foundation, which needs very large budget.
The figures above
describes
how a wave-energy
device
produces power and introduces a couple of models which have
different
manufacturing price and settlement position.

As can be
seen
from the picture, this equipment generates power by a combination of
wave
and air movements, through a complicated system includes a range of
separately
fuctioned
sections.

In terms of operational structure, the
device
consists of two levels. The lowest level
is built
halfly
under the water
so
that the
wave
can go inside and creating
wind
from its movements. On this
room’s
ceiling, two doors
were created
, the
left
one is
totally
opened
so
that the air can
be blown
up to the second
floor
and a ventilation
was built
on the right as a path of the
wind
comes
from the upper room.

On the second
floor
, which
is put
above the water level, a double
turbine
device
was set
exactly at the middle of the
room
and divides it into three parts: two separated
rooms
in the same size on the
left
, each contains one
turbine
engine and another chamber is on the right, in which both
turbines
are
fuctioned
.
In contrast
with the
first
floor’s
ceiling, the ventilation
was set
on the
left
to
get
the
wind
from outside while an opened door is on the right to expel the air.

When the
wind
of the
first
floor
blows to the large
room
on the second
floor
, the lower
turbine
is
moved
, while the air from outside goes from the upper
small
room
to the chamber then flies down to the
first
floor
and
moves
the higher turbine.

In general
, the stronger the
wave
is, the stronger the
wind
is and it will create much power to form electrics.
Therefore
, it is more efficient if the wave-energy
device
is settled
far from the coast to
get
bigger
wave
. Nonetheless, it means the equipment
must
have a
big
and solid foundation, which needs
very
large budget.
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