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The bar chart above shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart above shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014. 1qdq
The chart provides the information of electricity used and produced by ten different countries in the world in the year 2014. In an overview, the data is depicted on the basis of ranks. China was the to among the countries which utilized as well as produced the energy whereas, Korea rep has the lowest rank. Firstly, by comparing with other countries, china has produced 5398 billion kwh and consumed 5322 billion kwh. On the rank basis, America has just below china, which they used 3866 billion kwh and 4099 billion kwh. Furthermore, third and fourth position was Russia and Japan, were they consumed 1038 billion kwh and 856. 7 billion kwh and produced 1057 and 936. 2 billion kwh. Meanwhile, India held the fifth position and the electricity utilized and made was below 1000 billion kwh. The lowest position was south Korea which their rate was half of India's. On the other hand, Canada, France, Brazil was the another countries after India whereas their rate was substantially decreased. Finally, Germany hold the ninth position but the consumption rate was higher than Canada i. e. , 582. 5 billion kwh.
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IELTS academic The bar chart above shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.

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