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The pie charts below show the comparison of exports in Great Britain over five years

The pie charts below show the comparison of exports in Great Britain over five years 56qMp
The given two pie charts compare several products which were shipped to other countries by Uk during five years, starting from 2010 till the end of 2015. In general, these two given pie charts consist of five various important catering which were main goods for exporting abroad during five years from 2010 till 2015. It is obvious from the data that, two essential goods which are machinery and vehicles were most-favoured that oversea residents wanted to buy in 2010. Even after five years, they could maintain their popularity among rest of figures by showing a slow growth. In terms of less exported products, they also witnessed a slight increase in the given period. To begin, the top two products (Machinery, Vehicles) represented almost same percentage just under 30% in 2010. Combining both of them, the percentage became 57% which was over the half of whole pie chart. Most interestingly, even after five years all of them experienced a tiny growth by 1%, namely 30% for Machinery and 29% for Vehicles, respectively. Similarly, it is worth to mention that there were a slow climb in Plastics and Organic chemicals within five years. They illustrated 9% and 7% in 2010 and till 2015 grew up to 13% and 10%. However, only one figure which is Pharmaceuticals declined significantly in the given period of time. At the beginning of period, the proportion of exporting pharmaceuticals was at 27% and till 2015, the percentage of it faced a moderate decrease by representing 18% at the end of the provided period.
The
given
two pie charts compare several products which
were shipped
to other countries by
Uk
during five years, starting from 2010 till the
end
of 2015.
In general
, these two
given
pie charts consist of five various
important
catering which were main
goods
for exporting abroad during five years
from 2010 till 2015
. It is obvious from the data that, two essential
goods
which are machinery and vehicles were
most-favoured
that oversea residents wanted to
buy
in 2010. Even after five years, they could maintain their popularity among rest of figures by showing a slow growth. In terms of less exported products, they
also
witnessed a slight increase in the
given
period.

To
begin
, the top two products (Machinery, Vehicles) represented almost same percentage
just
under 30% in 2010. Combining both of them, the percentage became 57% which was over the half of whole pie chart. Most
interestingly
, even after five years all of them experienced a tiny growth by 1%,
namely
30% for Machinery and 29% for Vehicles,
respectively
.
Similarly
, it is worth to mention that there were a slow climb in Plastics and Organic chemicals within five years. They illustrated 9% and 7% in 2010 and till 2015 grew up to 13% and 10%.
However
,
only
one figure which is Pharmaceuticals declined
significantly
in the
given
period of time. At the beginning of period, the proportion of exporting pharmaceuticals was at 27% and till 2015, the percentage of it faced a moderate decrease by representing 18% at the
end
of the provided period.
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IELTS academic The pie charts below show the comparison of exports in Great Britain over five years

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