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In the diagram below, the process of printing newspapers, which is called lithography, can be seen.

In the diagram below, the process of printing newspapers, which is called lithography, can be seen. ByB5
In the diagram below, the process of printing newspapers, which is called lithography, can be seen. This procedure will be done in six stages in succession. Firstly, few numbers of cylinders are lifted in the rectangular plate. Secondly, those few cylinders are being laid to absorb a specific substance and get ready for the next stage. Then, the cylinders are kept waiting on top of the others to get installed and be used as papers. Subsequently, they get unveiled in stage four, which is linked to its next stage. Meanwhile, the papers are converting by number 4 in the simultaneous stage, which is five, the text is being reflected on them. Finally, those papers are ordered and laid on the conveyer to receive hot and cold air, for attaching the text, and making them ready for release. In conclusion, the process of manufacturing newspapers is done by a machine, which consists of six consecutively stages to make papers ready.
In the diagram below, the process of printing newspapers, which
is called
lithography, can be
seen
. This procedure will
be done
in six
stages
in succession.

Firstly
, few numbers of cylinders
are lifted
in the rectangular plate.
Secondly
, those few cylinders are
being laid
to absorb a specific substance and
get
ready for the
next
stage
. Then, the cylinders are
kept
waiting on top of the others to
get
installed and be
used
as papers.
Subsequently
, they
get
unveiled in
stage
four, which
is linked
to its
next
stage
. Meanwhile, the papers are converting by number 4 in the simultaneous
stage
, which is five, the text is
being reflected
on them.
Finally
, those papers
are ordered
and laid on the
conveyer
to receive hot and
cold
air, for attaching the text, and making them ready for release.

In conclusion
, the process of manufacturing newspapers
is done
by a machine, which consists of six
consecutively
stages
to
make
papers ready.
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IELTS academic In the diagram below, the process of printing newspapers, which is called lithography, can be seen.

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  American English
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159 words
6.5
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