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The pie charts below show the comparison of different kinds of energy production of France in two years.

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The pie charts represents the comparison of various kinds of energy production of France in the years 1995 and 2005. In short, coal was only energy production more in both the 1995 and 2005. To beging with, the gas proportion was. Second highest in 1995 and which was approximately similar. The next following producing variety petrol which was 29. 27% in 1995 and it was decreased to 19. 55% in 2005. Further more, Nuclear and other varieties of manufacturing were least in both the years. In comparison, it was clearly shown that the nuclear production was raised little from 1995 to 2005. The other type production was also increased by 2 times from 1995 to 2005. To sum up, it is clear that the manufacturing of coal variety was 29. 80 percent in 1995 and it increased slightly that is 30. 93 percent in the year 2005. The manufacturers of coal production is greater in 1995 and 2005.
The pie charts represents the comparison of various kinds of energy
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of France in the years 1995 and 2005. In short, coal was
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with, the gas proportion was. Second highest in 1995 and which was approximately similar. The
next
following producing variety petrol which was 29. 27% in 1995 and it
was decreased
to 19. 55% in 2005.

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more, Nuclear and other varieties of manufacturing were least in both the years.
In comparison
, it was
clearly
shown that the nuclear
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production
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from 1995 to 2005. The other type
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was
also
increased by 2 times from 1995 to 2005. To sum up, it is
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that the manufacturing of coal variety was 29. 80 percent in 1995 and it increased
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30. 93 percent in the year 2005. The manufacturers of coal
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is greater in 1995 and 2005.
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