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The charts below provide information about energy generation by fuel type in Florida in two separate years.

The charts below provide information about energy generation by fuel type in Florida in two separate years. daNX
The pie charts compare the amount of energy generation by fuel type in Florida in 2007 and 2022. Overall, the use of natural gas and nuclear will increase considerably, however, the use of coal, oil and other will fall dramatically. In addition, renewables will face a small decrease. In 2007, natural gas as a source of energy generation stood at 38. 8% in Florida. Coal was not far behind, standing at 29. 3%. Nuclear and other both accounted for just about a tenth of energy generation. Nevertheless, oil and renewables indicated a small proportion of energy generation in 2007: 6. 7% of oil and 2. 1% of renewables. In contrast, it is predicted that natural gas will face a sharp increase by 2022. It will become 54. 4%, which is more than a half of energy generation. In addition, nuclear will rise to 15. 9% by 2022. However, oil and other will decrease considerably to 1. 1% and 3. 4% respectively. Coal will drop to just over a fifth of energy generation, when renewables will fall to only 1. 5%.
The pie charts compare the amount of
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energy
generation by fuel type in Florida in 2007 and 2022.

Overall
, the
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use
of natural gas and nuclear will increase
considerably
,
however
, the
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use
of coal,
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oil
and other will fall
dramatically
.
In addition
, renewables will face a
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small
decrease.

In 2007, natural gas as a source of
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generation stood at 38. 8% in Florida. Coal was not far behind, standing at 29. 3%. Nuclear and other both accounted for
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about a tenth of
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generation.
Nevertheless
,
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oil
and renewables indicated a
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small
proportion of
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energy
generation in 2007: 6. 7% of
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oil
and 2. 1% of renewables.

In contrast
, it
is predicted
that natural gas will face a sharp increase by 2022. It will become 54. 4%, which is more than a half of
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generation.
In addition
, nuclear will rise to 15. 9% by 2022.
However
,
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oil
and other will decrease
considerably
to 1. 1% and 3. 4%
respectively
. Coal will drop to
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just
over a fifth of
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generation, when renewables will fall to
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1. 5%.
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IELTS academic The charts below provide information about energy generation by fuel type in Florida in two separate years.

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